i want a sweet girl frndEspecially if you write in the present tense, second person allows the reader to experience the story as if it’s their own. To avoid a “choose your own adventure” feel or an a
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Interessato a: Compagno d'attività
Razza: asiatico
Vita: Vivi con i genitori
Eye Catcher: Braccia
Altezza: 5'3 pollici
Corpo: magro
Capelli/Occhi: Marrone, Nero
Fumo: Non c'è modo
Bere: Non toccarlo mai
Esercizio 2 volte a settimana
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Scolarizzazione: Abbandono scolastico
Religione: Agnostico
Reddito: $15,001 To $25,000
Occupazione: Bachi Set Krna
Prole: Nessuna
Personalità: Avventuroso
Nazione: Pakistan
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i want a sweet girl frndEspecially if you write in the present tense, second person allows the reader to experience the story as if it’s their own. To avoid a “choose your own adventure” feel or an aggressive tone, mix up sentence structure and add in description and dialogue. Using the pronoun “you” and describing action as it happens supplies a personal sense of urgency, propelling the story—and the reader—forward.Example You’re late. Heart pounding, you race up the stairs as the train enters the station. You weave around the slowmoving people milling on the platform and dash towards the train, throwing your body through the doorway with only a moment to spare.

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